Nigel Barrett - June ads

These are the two variations I put forward to Nigel last Saturday. The space is for Bexley Magazine (90.5 x 131mm). Im really happy with them as they're clean and well aligned. What do you think though, too subtle perhaps? The Bickham Script Pro 'g' doesnt fit in too well as you can see, but I think the face adds class, plus it was the only other script available at work other than Edwardian Script which is overkill as its a system font. Im loving fine lines too, they seem to add order to a potentially busy environment.


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