Nice, a bit late now, but a few bits of my thoughts and criticism...
I dont like the way the numbers dont line up in the telephone section - would have been very easy to adjust all of the tracking to correct.
I dont enjoy the way the website looks when its written on the card, the 1 is far too close to the letters next to it (a couple of tracking nudges wouldve worked) and its size perhaps??
It seems alot of info to put on a card aswell so it mustve been difficult, but there seems to lack a strong enough grid - it seems that youve made things large when they need'nt be perhaps and its made the card messy.
But I know it was for a visually illiterate client probably who asked you to make it big and bold etc. so your excused on that last point slightly.
Otherwise its nice and youve put a touch of nice photoshopery 'metal shine' in an otherwise straight buisiness card.
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Nice, a bit late now, but a few bits of my thoughts and criticism...
I dont like the way the numbers dont line up in the telephone section - would have been very easy to adjust all of the tracking to correct.
I dont enjoy the way the website looks when its written on the card, the 1 is far too close to the letters next to it (a couple of tracking nudges wouldve worked) and its size perhaps??
It seems alot of info to put on a card aswell so it mustve been difficult, but there seems to lack a strong enough grid - it seems that youve made things large when they need'nt be perhaps and its made the card messy.
But I know it was for a visually illiterate client probably who asked you to make it big and bold etc. so your excused on that last point slightly.
Otherwise its nice and youve put a touch of nice photoshopery 'metal shine' in an otherwise straight buisiness card.
Love you,
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Some lovely comments there Jordan, thanks. It's good to get criticised, rather than, 'they're good'.
Here's the grid I used:
http://www.designwithoutsleep.com/blog/1stop_grid.jpg
They wanted their logo to have a metallic look.
I agree with the '1' in the website & email on the bottom right.
I dont understand why the numbers dont line up as they're the same amount of characters.
They wanted all the stuff on the card.
I could've made the type smaller.
Oh well, I only charged an hour for that job anyway, but next time I will work on it longer.
_tollerton
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